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Scoot's avatar

I dont know what the gasp line was supposed to be amid all these gasp lines but anyway this was good

E.B. Howard's avatar

I gasped aloud when “that last fight” came to me. Very much an “Oh no…oh YES” moment.

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I'm gonna need a minute

I'm gonna need a lot of minutes

Anyway I agree with Scoot this was very good

E.B. Howard's avatar

pat pat My work here is done.

J. M. Allen's avatar

Excellent as always! If you need me I'll be crying in the fetal position somewhere.

E.B. Howard's avatar

The emotional damage you signed up for (I’m sorry, it’s too much fun.)

The Casual Writer's avatar

All the emotionssss 😭

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Now I'm really looking forward to THE TALK.

Bridget Riley's avatar

The MAN HUG 😭😭😭😭

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Im gonna need a lot of minutes also. 😭😭😭 soo good in a seriously sad way.