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The Casual Writer's avatar

Happy endings for all the supers, yaaaay!!

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E.B. Howard's avatar

😊 It couldn't stay terrible forever!

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Bridget Riley's avatar

HAPPY ENDING

I was trying so hard not to restack spoilers, but BABY SPARKY’S PARENTS ARE GETTING MARRIED.

This was such a fun serial, and also I need more. No rush but please hurry.

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E.B. Howard's avatar

And am I just now realizing I'm out of space in the story in which to let a supervillain crash their wedding? Yes. Yes, I am. 🤦🏻‍♀️

I'm glad you liked it! There will be more. It might take a little bit, but the drafts are there.

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Bridget Riley's avatar

Post-credits wedding scene!

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

DA DA DA DUM, DA DA DA DUM...

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

"A single wide and untroubled lake of sky".

That is a perfect way to end a superhero story. Brilliant. Just brilliant. (Also, I loved the line about how many pieces his soul is in. Ha!)

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E.B. Howard's avatar

Thank you! I had a lot of fun with it. (It is not one piece, lol.)

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I'm guessing that is going to come back to bite him later. I've read stories about splitting up souls...

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Scoot's avatar

AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER---

No, wait--wait a minute. Christa isn't going to have any second thoughts about Liam? She only knew him when he was possessed, what is the basis of their relationship now??? She has a get-out-of-relationship-free card.

and is archangel still around??? Or just--they've taken away his minions and so cut off his hands, so to speak?

GREAT WORK snark aside, EB! This was a fun serial, thanks for taking us on a wild ride through this universe! looking forward to the epilogue!

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E.B. Howard's avatar

Anyway, thank you!! It's been a wild ride for sure and you've been fantastic to have along. I will address some of the other stuff and definitely there will be edits before this story is in the shape I want it to be. Definitely an experiment, but I'm glad that I just did it instead of trying to make it perfect first.

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E.B. Howard's avatar

NO NO the snark is good you just- heck it scoot, I knew I was going to forget something lmao. It was supposed to be clear archangel is 200% dead and I must have missed getting that in there.

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

So he's like REALLY dead and not just mostly dead. :)

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