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Scoot's avatar

I hate how much I enjoy this. Well done

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E.B. Howard's avatar

A+ feedback. If I had marketing I would put this all over it.

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Scoot's avatar

Who hurt you to make you so good at romantic tension. This is awful/enjoyable. Please stop/continue.

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Bridget Riley's avatar

I LOVE THIS

Everything. All of it. I’m so here for it.

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The Casual Writer's avatar

"He actually hadn't thought that far ahead." Jajaja, pendejo. I'm ready for even more tension!

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Oh dear. Oh no. Oh dear.

I have a bad feeling about this.

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E.B. Howard's avatar

I can't imagine what could possibly go wrong!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I feel this. Well done.

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E.B. Howard's avatar

Thank you very much! It means a lot to hear it. That's always my hope in writing.

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