I like that, just when we forget that sebastian is a real human being with feelings and motivations unto himself, you cut to his pov and let us see his own, quiet mental crisis which is an excellent foil to marissa’s loud and public one. Yet she pretends to be quiet and secretive and he pretends to be gregarious. Really enjoying these characters. Though—now that theyve kissed they are inevitably going to deepen in misunderstanding and argue so, not looking forward to that. But one episode at a time! This is such a fun series.
I like that, just when we forget that sebastian is a real human being with feelings and motivations unto himself, you cut to his pov and let us see his own, quiet mental crisis which is an excellent foil to marissa’s loud and public one. Yet she pretends to be quiet and secretive and he pretends to be gregarious. Really enjoying these characters. Though—now that theyve kissed they are inevitably going to deepen in misunderstanding and argue so, not looking forward to that. But one episode at a time! This is such a fun series.
Your analysis warms my writerly heart, thank you!!
Finally, some progress! Also THE KISS!!
Yay!! They’re getting better at feelings (at least for the moment)!! I love them so much!
I think there’s definitely some progress being made!